The Mysterious Illness Part 1

This is a series of the illness of a girl named Madison (Played by Sarah) and her friend, Sophia (Played by Isabelle). Madison’s mother is played by Kanani.

After reading, please tell me what you think. This is based on a true story.

*Part 1*

Madison walked into the kitchen where her mom was serving Pizza Hut pizza. “Mommy, my stomach hurts.”


“You’re probably just overly hungry.” Her mom said, “Why don’t you eat some pizza? It might make your tummy feel better.”

Madison didn’t protest. She ate the pizza, even though she wasn’t hungry. She ate so slowly that she finished dinner at 8 o’ clock.


Madison didn’t have the stomach flu. She didn’t have any virus. But what was wrong? Madison’s stomach was constantly hurting. Sometimes even in the middle of the night she would wake up because her stomach was hurting. She had had problems ever since she was little. There were bumps on her elbows and knees that itched like crazy.


Her friend, Sophia also had problems. She had migraine headaches frequently and they hurt so bad that most of the time she stayed in bed.


Madison decided to talk to her mom about it.


“Mommy, I want to be healthy, and I want my friend to be well too.” said Madison. “Do you know what is making me sick? I am tired of my stomach hurting all the time.”

“I’m sorry sweetie, but I don’t know. Are you sure you aren’t anxious about anything?” Her mom asked.

“I know I’m not anxious about anything, Mommy,” Madison said, “I wish I could be like everyone else in the world. No one else has stomach aches and itchy bumps like me.”

“Well, I’ll ask the doctor about it . You have your annual check-up at the doctor’s office tomorrow.” Madison’s mother said, “Now, go get some sleep.”

Madison went to bed thinking about what would happen the next day. She hoped the doctor could help her.

♦ To be continued.♦

Stay tuned for part 2 coming soon!

What do you think? Do you know what could be wrong with Madison and Sophia?

P.S. Beforever starts tomorrow!

– American Girl Doll Artist :)


19 comments on “The Mysterious Illness Part 1

  1. I can’t wait for the next part! And be forever tomorrow!! I have no idea what their sickness could be I am not a sickness doctor :) I’m sorry if I commented this twice, I can’t tell.

  2. Hey, I think it might be gluten issues because I had those same problem like stomach aches and migraines. I’m going to go read part 2 to find out !
    P.s. I love the story!!!!